Here's the 2nd part I might create an alternative ending..If my mood gets any better..My apologies for my dark attitude. Uhm well if you've noticed I've kinda taken out the original verse just cuz I didn't like it..but I'm still keeping that third line to put it in the noe new original(actually alternative) verse. lol & I still gotta unjumble some line in the verse lol.
The Report Comes In. Just As a Sin,
It's been too long to confess..& the boy's okay
but his hearts in repair. This girl's got his heart in a hole
She'll confess the truth. The day of romance was a day
for forgivness, The girls been with the guys
She was her many lovers, but the boys she's been keen to
Is dead inside & the surgeons just aren't there to help.
He's ready to die..But to realize from his last mistake
He was the rash & the horrible mood, forgetting the words
of the good & never seeing the light just as the girl
would realize she'll never see the boy her heart was meant for,
but changed the fate & forever will the boy begone from her life.
The final candle was blown, the girl is gone in her mind for a few years
as her 20th birthday was the day she'd never forget
with drunken eyes all the ones who ever cared about her was there,
Even that boy she was so cold & broken before
& looking into his eyes she felt the feeling
her smile that would make anyone smile..
SOME LINE OUT THERE (NOT PART OF SONG) VERSE:
murmered under his breathe "Thought to love you in the end.Forever & ever."
ALTERNATIVE VERSE:
But the boy stood there holding out the present
To have a box she opened it quickly & as she opened..
a tune rang out resembling a song on the day,
the day when the he had first held her in her arms
& looked into her beautiful eyes, her memories rushed into her head
& she held the boy tight promising to never let go..
But it was all in the head..When she looked up the boy,
he was gone & had rushed out the door she grapsed the floor
finally snapped in her head & she was insane in her eyes
& In the adrenaline rush she tackled
the boy held her in her arms as the boy stood in the snow
& he looked up at the sky remembering the days..
He's finally seen the light He forgave her
& held her as if this was the last time
& kept the happy ending he'd always want with her forever & ever
Finally whispering "I love you."
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