I couldn't think of an title for this blog because it is mostly maybe. LOL but it is a poem and I want someone to tell me what they think...... well I think it is great but it is good to get someone else's opinion about something. Well I should get started so here it is!!!




Soft wind blows at my skin
warm and fuzzy;
Like my cocoa brown eyes
My hazel skin feels warm against the sun....
Maybe if I could fly I would
Kiss the sky.....and take a piece
of the warm sun to my heart.
I breathe beauty as I sit
On the blackest of sand and
My long black hair blowing to
The sky like black fire
Maybe if I was
a flaming godess
I would rule it all;
The sun the sky the moon
In full glory.
I feel the warm and fuzzy
Wind against my bronze like skin
I smile to the sky as
The rushes over the sand
Tickling my feet softly.
Maybe if I was as free as the
Water at the beach
I would be free as
Blue birds and bees
My love for nature
Frees my soul as I fly
To a beautiful heaven.....
My dream fades as I come back to
my bronze colored body
Covered with black sand
Dark as the smooth midnight



Well maybe it doesnt have maybe all the time in it all the time.... But I think it is a great poem, but I want someone to tell me what they think, even though it is kind of you know out there but it is good to get some critism sometime.